Sunday, March 13, 2011

Freestyle #1 (Non-Rhyming) "The Special Prom Night" (explanation)

This poem is made because it reminds me when I have my first dance . I felt so nervous and in this poem I express my feelings when I had my first dance . I felt so nervous , but happy and excited at the same time .  I imagine it over and over again and that's what makes me feel happy , maybe dance is not special as a kiss but it is still the part of unforgettable memory and I have that memory in my mind until today .

Acrostic #2 "Our Earth" (explanation)

I make this poem for protecting the earth . this poem have a message for you all that we need to save our earth , because earth is the place where we lived . if the earth is destroyed where we can live? there's no place better than our Earth . that's why it's all of our duty to save the earth , the earth can be saved by doing simple things like recycling and saving energy .

Sonnet #2 (Petrarchan) "Love Apart" (explanation)

This is a poem when people feel heart broke and after you have a break up . honestly i never get heart broke before but i got this inspiration from a film and my friends that ever feel this way . I think heartbreak can't be cured by anything except the person that you can't forget . If the person have forget you , i think u should move on unlike this poem . this poem shows a people that still in love with a person and the person already leave this people , but this people can't forget about him .

Shape poem #2 "Special Tree"

Shape poem #1 "In Love"

Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Haiku theme explanation " Love "

I choose my theme love because love is the most beautiful thing in the world , but can be painful . i think love is very suitable for the haikus because it's very attempting people to read the poem and enjoy it . i enjoy writting love haikus because love is a strong topic that anyone can think of .  You  don't need to think that far but you will still get your inspiration .

Sonnet #4 (Shakespearean) "What if My Parents Know"

Today , it was an amazing day
We sit next to each other side by side
We saw dolphins and sunset bear the bay
you cuddle me up when you saw me cried

i'll do anything to protect our love
because I think not anyone should know
but still you are the one who I think of
next I think we should see the snow

what if our love is going to lasted
cause I think my parents knew about this
if they both knew they will keep me guarded
and I don't know what all the things I miss

I hope they agreed on our relationship
because both of them have really strong grip